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Different people estimated the weight of the plates differently. According to Smith's one-time-friend Willard Chase, Smith told him in 1827 that the plates weighed between 40 and 60 pounds (18–27 kg), most likely the latter.
 
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A FairMormon Analysis of Wikipedia: Mormonism and Wikipedia/Golden plates
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An analysis of the Wikipedia article "Golden plates"  Updated 9/21/2011

Reviews of previous revisions of this section

December 2009

Summary: A review of this section as it appeared in Wikipedia in December 2009.

Section review

Described composition and weight

From the Wikipedia article:
The plates were first described as "gold", and beginning about 1827, the plates were widely called the "gold bible".

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Harris (1859) , p. 167; Smith (1853) , pp. 102, 109, 113, 145; Grandin (1829) .

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
When the Book of Mormon was published in 1830, the Eight Witnesses described the plates as having "the appearance of gold".

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Smith (1830)

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
The Book of Mormon describes the plates as being made of "ore".

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Smith (1830) .

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
In 1831, a Palmyra newspaper quoted David Whitmer, one of the Three Witnesses, as having said that the plates were a "whitish yellow color", with "three small rings of the same metal".

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Cole (1831)

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
Joseph Smith, Jr.'s first published description of the plates said that the plates "had the appearance of gold"

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Smith (1842)

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
But Smith said that Moroni had referred to the plates as "gold." Late in life, Martin Harris stated that the rings holding the plates together were made of silver,

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Joseph Smith History 1:34; Harris (1859) , p. 165.

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
and he said the plates themselves, based on their heft of "forty or fifty pounds" (18–23 kg),

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Harris (1859) , p. 166

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
"were lead or gold".

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Harris (1859) , p. 169.

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
Joseph's brother William Smith, who said he felt the plates inside a pillow case in 1827, said in 1884 that he understood the plates to be "a mixture of gold and copper...much heavier than stone, and very much heavier than wood".

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Smith (1884)

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
Different people estimated the weight of the plates differently. According to Smith's one-time-friend Willard Chase, Smith told him in 1827 that the plates weighed between 40 and 60 pounds (18–27 kg), most likely the latter.

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Chase (1833) , p. 246.

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
Smith's father Joseph Smith, Sr., who was one of the Eight Witnesses, reportedly weighed them and said in 1830 that they "weighed thirty pounds" (14 kg).

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Lapham (1870) .

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
Joseph Smith's brother, William, said that he lifted them in a pillowcase and thought they "weighed about sixty pounds [27 kg] according to the best of my judgment".

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Smith (1883) .

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
Others who lifted the plates while they were wrapped in cloth or enclosed in a box thought that they weighed about 60 pounds [27 kg]. Martin Harris said that he had "hefted the plates many times, and should think they weighed forty or fifty pounds [18–23 kg]".

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Harris (1859) , pp. 166, 169.

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
Joseph Smith's wife Emma never estimated the weight of the plates but said they were light enough for her to "move them from place to place on the table, as it was necessary in doing my work".

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Smith (1879)

FAIR's analysis:


From the Wikipedia article:
None of the witnesses specified the exact size of the plates or the number of leaves contained in them, but one scholar speculates that, had the plates been made of 24-karat gold (which Smith never claimed), they would have weighed about 140 pounds (64 kg).

Wikipedia footnotes:

  • Vogel (2004) .

FAIR's analysis:


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Interpreter: A Journal of Latter-day Saint Faith and Scholarship, "Mormonism and Wikipedia: The Church History That “Anyone Can Edit”"

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The ability to quickly and easily access literature critical of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints has been made significantly easier through the advent of the Internet. One of the primary sites that dominates search engine results is Wikipedia, an online encyclopedia that “anyone can edit.” Wikipedia contains a large number of articles related to Mormonism that are edited by believers, critics, and neutral parties. The reliability of information regarding the Church and its history is subject to the biases of the editors who choose to modify those articles. Even if a wiki article is thoroughly sourced, editors sometimes employ source material in a manner that supports their bias. This essay explores the dynamics behind the creation of Wikipedia articles about the Church, the role that believers and critics play in that process, and the reliability of the information produced in the resulting wiki articles.

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